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damn, this hits deep. amazing work.

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WOOO DOOMED YURI!!!

Gorgeous.

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WHY DO LESBIANS ALWAYS KILL EACH OTHER IN VISUAL NOVELS ON ITCH? I DONT GET IT

this is beautiful & powerful

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Reading this out loud made me feel the pain inside of the writer and that is pretty freakin amazing!! 10/10 
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Oh wow, thank you so much for reading it aloud! Your voice is so lovely and you got most of the intended intonations right for each stanza. We didn't expect anyone to do any LPs of this game since it's rather short and a bit hard to swallow, but we're grateful nonetheless. 

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Beside the fact that the kinetic text and the editing and intentionally blurry art added a lot to the feel of the poem, I really liked the poem itself too, raw and piercing like I'm sure it was supposed to be. I'm not a poem person, but reading it aloud to myself as I went through it helped with the delivery, and it hit the spots that were intended.

I really like this!!

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Raw, emotional, and beautiful. A true work of art and literature.

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This was so raw and tactile. Y'all really elevated the text with the kinetic elements and scrolling images. Amazing to read through. Thanks for making this <3